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I just wanted to tell you that this is an excellently written story. I have to believe that you are a professional author. If not, you should be. I can't find one thing to criticize.
Both voices were great representations of the characters. One could identify each without a problem.
To top everything off, I didn't see the end coming unil really close to the end. That is almost unheard of for me. I can always tell you the ending!
Thank you for a truly great story!
Thanks so much for the wonderful compliment! I've been writing (and reading) most of my life, so glad it's paid off a little.
I really enjoyed writing this story, and I'm so glad people have enjoyed reading it--and thanks again for letting me know!
Dang, somehow I lost my review. Hit a wrong button on something. Anyhow, I just loved this story. It was great to read Dean having found some peace in his life, he truly needs that. Hopefully, he'll keep Sam grounded. Sam had a really hard time seeing Slim and Jess as peaceful spirits that really didn't need to move on yet. I'm sure with Dean there to help Sam understand that, he will in time. Thanks again for a great read!
So glad you liked this--my two absolutely favorite characters ever (Jess Harper and Dean Winchester!) This was first posted on the Laramie fic site and they all agreed that Jess and Slim would be perfectly happy watching over their land and friends for eternity. Maybe someday Sam will see that!
Thanks again for all the wonderful reviews.
Well, I just loved it!Loved the Casper comment (friendly ghosts). I think Dean is right in leaving Slim and Jess alone. They aren't angry spirits only spirits who are hear to help. Perhpas that is there moving on, to help people in dire need. Hopefully, Sam listened to Dean. Looking forward tor eading the epilog.
I love the twist here! I never suspected Jess and Slim were perhaps something else besides perhaps spirits(?). I love how Jess through himself in front of Dean to protect him. Dean's use to doing that himself and not have others do it for them. I'm really looking forward to the next 2 chapters!!
Author's Response: Sorry for the delay in responding. I'm glad you're enjoying, and hope you like the ending! I tried to tie up both stories happily (well, more or less...) Thanks for your reviews!
Evil, evil cliffie! I'm going to be biting my nails until the next update. I find it interesting that Sam doesn't trust Slim but Dean seems to trust Jess. Of course Sam is a lot harder during the Dean's post hell time. The scenes with Dean and Jess in the tunnels were quite intense. I'm really looking forward to the next update!
Well, Dean is also not firing on all cylinders at this point...though he is still a hunter!
So glad you're enjoying!
My prize will have to be a cross over with The BV (I'm a Heathen if it helps) with SPN. And naturally I'm a Dean girl, too!
Anhow...I loved how the boys (all 4) worked with each other for a plan to get the Fugly. Finally, Sam is seeing Dean for how he really is and not a wilting flower. Looking forward to where you are taking this story!
Well, I'll see what I can do <g> Have you read "Iron Will" by Ridley James, which is a retelling of "Iron Box" (with teenaged Dean as Heath!) Can't remember what site I read it on, though...
Once again, thanks for all your support, and glad you're enjoying!
Wow! this has been a fun, suspenseful read! I really like how you have interwoven the two shows, although(shamefully) I have no idea what the other is. Sam and Dean mesh with Jess and Slim very well. I truely hope you finish this story, since at this point I am chewing my fingernails! lol Before Supernatural came to be westerns and monsters were my genres...so yea!!!!
I've been a western fan most of my life (never really liked monsters till SPN!) so had a lot of fun connecting the two. As someone noted already, the show was called Laramie (it's now out on DVD) and I highly recommend it.
I'm so glad you're enjoying this, and thanks for giving me the push to keep posting!
Hey, it dawned on me which old Western your characters are based on. I remember watching this series about 20 years ago in reruns. Is it Laramie? I really did like that Western. But my favorite Western is The Big Valley, wonder if you know of it, too? I do believe you have their characters right even though you've moved them to our century. Dean and Sam seem like a good match for friendship with these brothers and friend.
Congratulations! You're the only one who identified the show!
I've been writing Laramie for years (this story was posted about a year ago on the Laramie Relay Station site) but I thought the characters fit so well I'd try posting here, so I'm glad people are enjoying it. Yes, I loved The Big Valley and Lancer too (watched most of the old westerns) as you might remember from my Bonanza ep rewrite.
Thanks for your encouragement!
I really like how Dean and Sam were bonding with Jess and Slim, that they were able to actually open up to them. I really enjoyed their separate jouney. I still think Sam should give Dean more credit. He's not as "fragile" as Sam thinks. I'm relieved that the calvary made it it time to save Dean (again). Looking forward to the next part.
I'm intriqued about Jess (are we sure he's a man?). The scene where the "wolf" was chowing down on Dean's arm was quite gripping. Anyhow, luckily for Dean Jess showed up or Dean would have been puppy chow (again). Jess is right about them hunting this creature together. I hope Sam hooks up with them soon, he shouldn't be out by himself. I'm worried about Dean's injury, it seems quite serious. Looking forward to more!
Thanks for the encouragement! I hope you'll like the next chapter.
Please, please, please give us more. I love all of your stories! You're a great writer!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. You have no idea how much it means to get encouragement from reviewers!
Both guys are really hard headed. They are really far apart in their relationship right now. Sam needs to have more faith in Dean though. Sam's view that Dean is weak and can't handle himself could actually backfire. Dean may have gone through hell and back but he can still do the job. I loved how both wanted to go back to the motel but neither one was willing to admit to it. Dean also needs to see Sam as an adult who can take care of himself. I'm worried that Dean has decided to go on the hunt alone, seems like a hunt that needs more than one and an injured Sam may not be enough backup. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: They were in a bad place in early season 4, weren't they? And it lasted much longer than we all wanted. I'm glad you're enjoying the story!
Ouch, that is just so sad how Dean and Sam see each other. They aren't the way they use to be because both have gone through so much. They really need to talk to each other despite it being chick flickish. I really enjoyed this first chapter and hope to read more. Thanks for sharing your great POV of each brother.
Author's Response: That's sort of the point of this story...rediscovering each other, and learning to understand. I hope you enjoy the ride!
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