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Oh great story!
While urgently waiting for the next chapter of "hesitetion dance", I found this story and really had to force me to stop reading last night to get some sleep.
First I thought: Poor Dean, is save in hospital, comforted by his dad but still paranoidal. I was so wrong!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much (both for the comment and for looking for other stories!) I'm glad you like it!
Lovely story. Well written and entertaining. What you did was difficult, writing a whole story with Dean blind, but you kept me reading! Well done!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed it, and thanks so much for the wonderful compliment!
Fabulous story. I loved the Dean POV through the first chapters.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed this, and thanks so much for letting me know!
This was fabulous. Very well written and executed. Loved every word.
Great story, really loved your OC and think this was a fun prediciment for Dean to be in.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed this story, and took the time to let me know (I never knew how important reviews could be till now...) Thanks for the encouragement.
Poor Dean, I was as confused as much as him as to whom the villian was! Shoeweee! Good thing the real Maria showed up and saved the day. I found it sweet that Dean is part of her clan forever because his sure leaves him behind! Thanks for the great story.
Thanks so much for all your encouragement! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
great ending to a great story, thanks for writing
I'm glad you enjoyed it, and thank you for taking the time to let me know. Reviews do make a difference!
Great chapter. It seems Dean has found somebody he can trust - or can he? At least it appears she told him the truth about the eyes. Nice cliffhanger too, leaving us guessing what happened to the doc. Loving this, and looking forward to see what's gonna happen next.
evil cliffie! I hope Maria is O.K. if she's not then Deans in some serious trouble, who else knows the spell?
i am thoroughly enjoying this story, thanks for writing
Oh crap! I truly hope that Maria is ok, I don't think Dean could do this with out her. He would really feel the quilt if she died. I can't wait to see what happens. I have a feeling that Carrie, the nurse is not our villian. Hurry back!
Author's Response: I've appreciated all your reviews, and hope you like the ending. Thank you so much for taking the time to review!
I agree with Dean's thoughts. Someone should be taking care of him (and it should be a family member!). I'm so irritated with John, at least he knows Dean is hurt and needs someone. It would be nice if Sam were there, but he doesn't even know that Dean is in bad shape, and I'm sure know one has told him. I would hope he'd go viist Dean if he knew, but for John not to, grrr....I've always thought John was an obsessed SOB and his sons (at least Dean that is) comes in second place to his crusade. I really like that the doctor knows what Dean is about and is trying to help him. Looking forward to reading the next part of this chapter.
I love this! Seeing everything from Dean's POW is fascinating and captivating. Knowing only what he knows and figuring it out with him - it's brilliant and frustrating :-)
I love your style, great writing.
Thanks for sharing and please, update soon!
Yikes! I do believe Dean is in a hospital but that the Skinwalker is feeling him out. Poor Dean, his real Dad didn't show as much concern as the fake one (even though in reality it wasn't really concered for Dean). The part with Sam was sad. I was hoping it was the real Sam (and perhaps Dean is wrong about that). Looking forward to the next part.
Well, I'm trying to stick to canon, and we know that Dean didn't really talk to Sam for a few years before the pilot, so... I apologize if I've insulted any John fans, but he really was an obsessed so-and-so, wasn't he?
I gather the phone call was the real John? Such a shame the fake one is so much nicer. great job, I'm really enjoying this
Author's Response: Yeah, I thought John being too nice would be a dead giveaway that something was wrong...<g> Glad you're enjoying!
Hey, thanks , this chapter s awesome :) cant wait for the next one already
Keep it up ^^
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
wOW! really good. I love the way the first chapter made us think he was in hospital and just confused by all the paid meds, now I'm not so sure. Who is Ana, whats up with the doc and is it really John there?
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying this (and especially glad that you're letting me know!) Hopefully some (not all) will become clear in the next chapter...
Great chapter. I love how you manage to keep the suspense alive, by robbing Dean of sight, and scattering all those hints that something is off. Who is Ana? And what's the chanting Latin so it can't be heard all about? Why is Dean still spiking with fever? The doc is obviously holding something back. And what is John up to? Can't wait to find out.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! And just as a note...who said anything about the chanting being in Latin? <eg>
Hmmmm....Dean seems to be still really confused or he is truly feeling something is not right and it has something to do with the hunt. I wonder what the juniper and other herbs mean? Is the doctor on the up and up? Looking forward to the next chapter.
Glad you're enjoying it, and I hope I can keep the suspense going...
Thanks for reviewing!!!
what a fantastic start.Iassume Dean is in hospital. I've just found all your stuff on supernaturalville and I'm heading over there to read it, your very talented.Looking forward to more of this.
dude awesome story cant wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thanks! I guess I'd better get writing....
Please go on, this is awesome. The story has me captivated, and I can't wait to find out what actually happened. Love the flashbacks too, and Dean's confusion. I assume he's actually in a hospital, but you're doing a great job of twisting what Dean hears and feels into something that could be perceived as danger.
Oh, thank you for the encouragement! You're all so good at reading between the lines, or maybe you just know Dean all too well!
Oh, thank you for the encouragement! You're all so good at reading between the lines, or maybe you just know Dean all too well!
Hmmmm.....I'm thinking Dean is in a hospital, and his dad is there with him, but he is so confused and agitated he had to be restrained. I wonder what happened? The flashbacks/dreams are great. I can't wait to see where this story is going. So please hurry back!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I've got the next part almost ready to go, then three more that still need some more work. I'm glad you're enjoying it, and thanks for letting me know!
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