This was fantastic. i loved it!! Brilliant title too.
I really enjoyed reading this - you did a great job fleshing out the story and everything.
Though, i'd like to know if Sam stayed with Hannah afterwards or not.Lol, the end was classic.
Sam: "I hate you."
Dean: "Hey, dont blame me! Blame your girlfriend, the plague rat!"
Lol, it was great. i really enjoyed it! Well done.Bundi
He he, that was fun! Great story! It provided me a great distraction ^_^ I really enjoyed that! Poor Dean and now poor Sammy. lol. Loved it.
Loved it! So nice to read a story where John actually cares! I really like how you've written him here...
Aww, come on, don't just tease, give us the background story too where Dean almost died... please. Maybe in a flashback nightmare of Sam's or something I don't know. Love to see it though.
Don't worry, both background stories (Syracuse and Chambersburg) are on the agenda for the near future. :-)
Thanks for reading!
Poor Dean, I guess he got what he deserved (sort of). He didn't mean to go out and kiss Sam's girl. She after all kind of kissed him first. I hope Dean learned his lesson here! I really enjoyed your story!
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