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Wow. This was brilliant. I loved your writing style - it was really different, but still easy to follow.
I've totally just found a new favourite site.
Seriously though - this was really good. At first i wished it had continued on - covered the who and the why and the revenge and the recovery, but i've decided that the way you've done it works better afterall. Your version leaves the reader wishing for more, and it rounds it off nicely. if it had been continued, i think it might have... i dont know. it wouldnt have worked as well.
So good work. :) I'm really impressed.
This was a really awesome, well-written and heart-breaking story.
You told so much with just a few words here and John's (and Sammy's) being at a total loss, is completely understandable. Who knows what to do or say in such a situation, after all?!
Plus whoever did this, had it coming in spades and rightfully deserved whatever revenge Daddy Winchester rained down on them (because I'm beyond sure John found out who was responsible in two seconds flat).
I was hopping to read about John getting that sob.Poor Dean.
OMG!! This was really good! I want John to get whoever it is. Poor Dean!
Sequel, please! :)
Author's Response: Thank you sweetie, I'm really glad you enjoyed this :) Hopefully the inspiration for the sequel will come.
It didn't feel complete, but it was a good read. Perhaps another chapter? From Dean's prospective?
Author's Response: I plan to write a sequel in the future. This was pretty much an expansion of a drabble, so I get why it wouldn't feel complete to you; it's meant as a snippet in time. Either way, thanks for the review.
Devastating!!! I don't think Dean would ever have become the Dean we know after this. I think he would've been the perfect soldier but quiet and withdrawn and shy otherwise with Sam then becoming the one who tried to draw him out as they got older. I'd love a sequel!
Author's Response: Actually, I agree with you there. Their dynamics as teenagers would have been switched around, at least for a while after, making Dean draw into himself. I'm not even sure Sam would have been much in favor of going to Stanford without Dean either, as something like this would have probably made them even closer. I do plan to write a sequel, no worries, but I can't promise when it's going to happen. Thank you so much for your review =)
HOLY CRAP! Who has been hurting our Dean????? I hope John sends the monster to hell and beyond! You've got me hooked on this story!
Author's Response: Thank you for the lovely response :) This is a one-shot at the moment, though a sequel will probably happen in the future.
great fic, i enjoyed it so much thanks :)
Author's Response: Thank you! =) I'm really happy you liked it.
Yowzer ... very intense. i really recognized the sharp-as-a-tack Sam, even though it made me sad he's like that at nine. Dean's behaviour was really well described too. Enjoyed this a lot ... are we going to get a confrontation with the perpetrator?
Author's Response: Thank you! Characterization is a big part of making a situation like this sound plausible, so you totally made me happy =D I don't know about expanding on the actual confrontation, though. If anything, I would probably expand on the aftermath for them all, but I've got nothing in the works just yet. Again, thank you for reviewing!
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